INTERVIEW WITH BEYONCE
By: Maria Ceravalls and Alejandra GranadaInterview: Hi!, Beyonce , how are you?
Beyonce: Hi! I am tired because I get home from the gym.Interview: Has only coming to Spain to make a concert?
Beyonce: Yes, but also I want to see my fans of Spain.
Interview: Aaaaa, locking a boyfriend and as it found?
Beyonce: No, at the moment.
Interview: They are the couplet of the moment, When do you go to England will you take?
Beyonce: I don’t know, but it’s possible, if he want…
Interview: What do you wearing in the bag?
Beyonce: I wear my dog, she’s name is Puchi.
Interview: You will go to the convention of actors?
Beyonce: Yes, I will go, and I want to see again Brad Pitt and Angelina, they are my friends.
Interview: Do you liked the interview?
Beyonce : Yes, see you.
Interview: See you...
Good! The content is very good but unfortunately there are a lot of mistakes.
ResponderEliminarMISTAKES:
1)I am tired because I get home from the gym.
Wrong verba tense. You are talking about "now" so you must use the present continuous.-- "...because I AM GETTING home..."
2)"Has only coming to Spain to make a concert?" Grammar mistake-- HAVE YOU COME to Spain..."
3)"Aaaaa, locking a boyfriend and as it found?". Wrong sentence. You probably want to say: "ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A BOYFRIEND?
4)"You are the couplet of the moment, When do you go to England you take it." Wrong sentence. I don't understandit. Please rewrite it.
5)What do you wearing in the bag?/I wear my dog. Grammar mistak and wrong word-- "WHAT ARE YOU CARRYING in the bag?/I'M CARRYING my dog."
6)"she’s name is Puchi". Wrong word.-- "HER name..."
7)"The interview touches Puchi".Wrong word. The person who does the interview is the INTERVIEWER.
8)"its mine not you’re": Wrong word. -- "IT'S mine, not YOURS".
9)"Do you will go to the convention of actors?" Grammar mistake.-- "WILL YOU GO..."
10)"Do you liked the interview?" Grammar mistake.-- "DID YOU LIKE.."
Please, make the corrections.