In the picture one are three squirrels of the film Alvin y las ardillas 2.Are 3 squirrels in this photo making modern clothes.
Are dancing very well.
Are on a big stage blue and very illuminist.
In the Picture two are a winnie the Pooh an hes friends:Piglet, Igor and tiger. Are doing a picnic in the camp.
Tiger, huini and Piglet eating a sandwich.
Igor looking bees.
All are happy an enjoying the day.
In the picture three are a Bambi and Tambor.
Bambi and Tambor are happy.
Are very friends. In this photo Bambi is extended
and Tambor is sitting. Tambor is small
than Bambi. Two are beautiful.
Quite good, but there are some mistakes.Be careful!
ResponderEliminarMISTAKES:
1)"In the picture one are three squirrels"/ "In the Picture two are a winnie the Pooh and..."/
"In the picture three are a Bambi and Tambor": Grammmar mistake--- "In picture one THERE ARE three squirrells"/ "In picture 2 THERE ARE (or WE CAN SEE)Winnie the Pooh and..." / "In picture 3 THERE ARE (or WE CAN SEE) Bambi and Tabor"
2)"Are 3 squirrels in this photo making modern clothes.": Grammar mistake and wrong word.--"There are 3 squirrels in this photo.THEY ARE WEARING modern clothes".
3)"Are dancing very well": Grammar mistake. This sentence hasn't got a subject!-- "THEY are dancing..."
4)"Are on a big stage blue and very illuminist": Grammar mistake and wrong word: Again, you need a subject.-- "THEY are on a blue AND BRIGHT stage"
5)"Winnie the Pooh an hes friends": Spelling mistake-- "Winnie the Pooh and HIS friends"
6)"Piglet, Igor and tiger. Are doing a picnic in the camp": Punctuation and wrong word.-- "Piglet, Igor and Tiger ARE DOING a picnic in the COUNTRYSIDE".
7)"Tiger, huini and Piglet eating a sandwich/ Igor looking bees"-- Grammar mistake. In these sentences you forgot the auxiliar verb "to be"--"Tiger, Huini and Piglet ARE eating..."/ "Igor IS looking AT the bees"
8)"All are happy an enjoying the day/ Are very friends": Grammar mistake. These senteces don't have a subject and there are some incorrect words.-- "THEY are happy AND enjoying.."/ "THEY are GOOD friends".
9)"Tambor is small than Bambi": Grammar mistake. The adjective must take the comparative form-- "Tambor is SMALLER than..."
Please, make the corrections.